Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should require students to study many subjects in different fields rather than just their major subjects.
The debate between whether to employ all the subject in syllabus or include only few required course has be proved to be controversial for different reasons. Nowadays, many are adamant that a myriad of things to be taken into consideration in order to judge constructive and destructive facets of this issue. some poeple hold the opinion that many subject should be included as much as possible because diverse knowledge is help for progressing in this era. however, some people refutes the claim and aver opposite view. From my vantage point, I concur with the later group's opinion and prop up that few subject should be encompassed for the better education.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that students have more focus if they will study only few subjects at the time. In fact, they will give more scrutinize the subject matter only if they have few subject. time management for the study will be easy for them and study hour will be lengthy where they can learn more indepth knowledge. As a result; they will be more seasoned and proficient in specific field. however, the things will be different if they have to give focus many subject at one time. Predicament lies in student's head, to study which subject first and give which one priority more, if course have a lot of subject in one semester. this consequences superficial knowledge and weak comprehension in the subject matter. As global job market demand for adept professional, that give rise to dumb human resources in the certain area. At last, really hurt the expectation of the student in the future to get high prospective job.
Secondly, another equally significant point to be included is even the brilliant student lose his enthusiasm in his interest. In fact, many subjects bind them in tight schedule. unfortunately, they are not able to give as much as time they should give to this proclivity to do something exceptional. because of this, they slowly distress from the study and may end lost their zeal to study something.
Lastly, since system rank student by evaluating their potential largely in every subject, this eduction policy may enervate bright student of certain field. On the other word, he/she might not get that encouragement that they should get to stay in that track. for instance, my friend, Balram where used to be very good at math in school however he had little problem in social study. During class eight, though he get A plus grade in the math, he happened to get C minus in the social. Paradoxically, he happened to judge by his all rank and nobody care his skills in mathematices. consequently, his interest in mathematices got dimmer. Had he been boosted in his strong part, he would have been more prowess in that area.
In conclusion, contempalting aforementioned reasons, one can understand how important of few subject at time; otherwise student may lose their ebullient bent in certain field. as a whole education system turns out to be ineffective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, lastly, may, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2492.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 503.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95427435388 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73578520332 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72073822975 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51888667992 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7009766907 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2962962963 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6296296296 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162756549173 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470718504177 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394707512334 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096151700879 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248429721757 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.