Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Submitted by ron_sd on Thu, 12/19/2019 - 10:11

No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the importance of the role which panning plays in our lives. Nowadays, we use the magic of panning in every aspect of our lives. Some people are of the opinion that in the modern era, everyone should have the ability to plan and organize, especially adolescents, whereas others hold the view that it is not essential. Nevertheless, I concur with the former group's opinion. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will elaborate on the reasons substantiating my point of view.
To begin with, knowing how to plan has assumed primacy since it boots the self-confidence. Youngsters should learn this skill from their parents in the very first years of their lives. Therefore, they have sufficient self-esteem to start doing a project without a need to be worried about the result. Using this ability, they can easily cope with many challenging situations and get the results they want.
Another equally important reason which I think deserves some word is that adolescents need this kind of ability in order to be successful in their education. There are lots of exams which they should take part in, and there are lots of assignments which they should do in the school and university. Accordingly, it is essential for them to have good planning in order to keep pace with the curriculum. My personal experience is a compelling example of this concept. When I just entered the university, I thought I could study less than the high school. Therefore, I did not take the classes serious. Therefore, I did not have any clear plan for studying that year; consequently, I failed some courses in my freshman year. But then I started to make a serious plan for all the exams and assignments in my sophomore year. I had a progression during that year. Therefore, I realized that the ability to plan and organize the subjects plays a vital role in our study progress.
Finally, I assert that people should have the planning skill in order to get a promotion in their jobs. For instance, if you want to find a decent job and keep getting better in the job, you have to push yourself to make a clear plan about it.
Considering all the reasons mentioned above, one could conclude that as the modern world continues to develop, it gets much essential for people to know how to plan and organize. There are some benefits associated with it. People can be more successful in their education; additionally, they can boost their self-esteem and find a decent job for themselves.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, finally, first, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, i think, kind of, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2062.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77314814815 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.753781382 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50462962963 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3657176008 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228798584831 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592638652423 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600401169808 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131364695564 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292676836329 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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