You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
> say where you think you left the papers
>explain why they are so important
>tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about some important documents I might have missed after attending the IBM Monthly conference in “IBIS Hotel” on the 6th of this month.
The meeting held in the banquet hall on the second floor and I am quite sure I have the documents till the second session. During the last session, I wrapped up the documents in a hurry as the driver is waiting to pick me up. I am sure that I missed them in the main hall.
The documents and notes have important details about the conference and the contact details of the industry leaders. The summary points for all the sessions are also noted down in the same. The documents are very necessary since I need to prepare a presentation for my team about the conference, by next week.
Hence, I request you to ask your staff to do thorough search all over the main hall, the documents has an ORACLE logo and address printed on it for your reference. In case if you find them, please call me on 0409876567 or you can reach my personal number 9987654321.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Harsha Vardhan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70731707317 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50970750623 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619512195122 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6428567182 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157219498924 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540063064042 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659834010563 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917072911125 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768133944446 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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