Weddings are more expensive in many countries comparison present and past. What is the reason behind this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays wedding ceremonies are becoming increasingly costly. This essay will discuss why this is happening and put forward several reasons to highlight the comparison trend of spending between the current and past era. In my opinion, this is a negative trend which can lead to the people in debt.
To begin with, there are a plethora of reasons which make the wedding function more expensive compared to previous times. The prime reason is that people now prefer to make the wedding arrangement in a hotel to celebrate the event, where they must pay a hefty amount to arrange a vast array of cuisines, and reception area for guests to give them a warm welcome. This is due to the fact that now people take the loan with high interest which makes their life miserable to payback within the agreed time frame. Whereas, people in the past time would like to make the arrangement within the nearby house rather than in a hotel; therefore, the wedding functions were comparatively fewer expenses than today.
A further reason which makes today's wedding more expensive is the higher prices. Currently, the inflation rate has increased at an alarming rate, and people have no. option except to buy expensive products for their weddings. Several studies attest to the fact that due to high inflation, the prices of necessary items for a wedding including clothes and jewelry have been increased by over 50%. That’s why weddings are getting more costly these days compared to the past era.
A final reason is that people today are more socialized and have a wide range of social networking. Due to this, they give preference to invite all of them along with kit and kin, as a result, it increases the budget caters to the need of their vast no. of guests. On the other hand, people in earlier times were limited to invite family members to arrange the wedding function within their budget.
In conclusion, I am of the view that expensive weddings should be discouraged as it has brought people in heavy debt to pay back, for this to be considered a negative trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85674157303 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47283562858 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539325842697 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.469546559 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250387327552 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830373900342 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062339180153 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152495416081 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053758880268 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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