Dear sir,
My name is Kamila and I am writing to convey my thanks to the tourist assistant who was very helpful throughout our trip to Himalayas and about our experiences .
Recently, we went for a tour to India to visit the world's tallest mountain The Himalayas on 13th october .The tour arrangements were made by our school through your "Union travel agency". The facilities provided were really convenient for us.The accomodation , the food served and the amenities we were given were really unmatchable.we could enjoy the hillside sceneries through our room windows itself.One of the most unforgettable memories was the "site seeing",the knowledge about the habitats ,the peduins , various trees and animals were clearly explained by the "Tour guide"-Mr.shyam.He was a wonderful personality and i found him very sincere towards his profession, he explained our questions in a well eloborated manner with great patience..I was really astonished by his wide range of knowledge regarding the herbal plants living in the Himalayan Mountains.
I made up my mind at that of our stay, that after returning from the trip to give him a reward as a gratitude .so I have couried an "expensive Watch " to your agency address.I would like to request you to handover the gift to Mr.Shyam.
I thank you Once again for making our journey Enjoyable.
Yours faithfully,
kamila R
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33482142857 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28502057907 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674107142857 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.751480853 44.8134815571 497% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.166666667 76.5299724578 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.3333333333 16.8248392259 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170482777827 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808155776882 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316811929367 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854794883239 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301007973268 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 8.37731958763 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 70.7449484536 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 8.71597938144 163% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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