Some people think that you can only learn about the cultures of different places by travelling to them. Other people think that you can learn just as much about these places from reading books and watching travel documentaries about them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. ANSWER:
There is an incresingincreasing number of people who travel to various places ,for thr purpose of study and relaxation. while some people believe that for exploring mulitple countries and the culture and tradition it is only enough to research books and watching travel shows in television , others argue that the knowledge gain is much more when travelling to various destinations as now will be discussed in this essay.
In general ,travel to different countries and enjoying the landscaping is a great relaxation and stress buster. One could be able to Visit the world famous museums and historical places and buy statues of memorable things like miniatures of popular monuments when travel to a particular destination.Moreover the knowledge gain related to the country people visit would be unforgettable .It is a life long memory which help students to get motivated and useful for studies.
On the other hand, by sitting at home and exploring on the internet and enjoying the beauty of places virtually may not seem more interesting.For Example ,watching "travel show " of Georgia on BBC might be a great entertainment to relish the nature and cultural values of people however visiting directly and enjoying is unmatchable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31308411215 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13601525366 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658878504673 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.248129737 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.5 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.6666666667 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181617620511 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912409153975 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517043940722 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101917264998 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691066054328 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.11 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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