The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The given graph reveals that the percentage of residents who are aged 65 and over in three different countries including America, Sweden and japan from 1940 and 2040.
Overall, the aged population in the USA and Sweden would be increased gradually during 100 years while there will be a rapid increase of the proportion of seniors in japan after 2020 although there is a slight reduction in 1960.
To begin with the aged population in the USA and Sweden, it can be observed that under 10% of residents are the aged 65 and over, and it has increased slightly although there are several fluctuations between 1940 and 2020. It is clear that there is a big difference from 2000 to 2020 which the aged people in United State has surged to 20% while old generation in Sweden has not been increased but dropped to just under 15%. In 2040, it is expected that the seniors in both countries would be extended to 20-25%.
Despite the growth of old population in former countries, there are only under 5% old residents in japan between 1960 and 2000. However, it would be skyrocketed between 2020 and 2040 from 10% to over 25%. Therefore, Japan should be well prepared to confront with aged society in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... countries would be extended to 20-25%. Despite the growth of old population in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71830985915 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44703194724 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4936971452 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.625 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295194251721 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130465514101 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958575156315 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193924169486 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891897258067 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.