The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps describes the current layout of Islip town center and proposed plans for its renovation. Overall,the Islip town center is expected to huge changes with new facilities such as dual carriage away,shopping center and bus station.
At present,small shops are situated on the either side of the main road.In the north wing, landscape of the rural area is present .in the south wing, houses are present ,a school and park are located on either side of south side.
Regarding future plans, proposal for a dual carriage away surrounding the town center is expected. Main road is set to be changed to footpath for pedestrians. the shops in the north are replaced by shopping center including bus station and car parking on either side of it. New houses are expected to built on north and south east wings. School is enlarged and built out of the ring road.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81756756757 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52506608409 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1710254656 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196090410987 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100148884097 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123169536534 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150037188419 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134193482351 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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