Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Jobs are a very important part of settling in our lives. To pay the bills we have to work. I am sure some people would believe that if we have an opportunity to get a job we should take it right away then wait for a job which satisfies, others would disagree. In my view, I firmly believe that we should take a job offer as soon as we have a chance. I feel this way for the following reasons, which I will develop in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, It is very hard to get a job in this competitive market. Many competition is there to get work. Even though many people are very smart and have a higher degree still they suffer to get employment. For example, my brother did finish his graduation in Chemistry as a major, he was lucky to get a job as a Lab chemist as soon as he finished his study. He was saying that when he went for an interview there were many people came just for the one position. Some of them have four to five years of experience and they are struggling to get employment. Even though he was not happy with this position but he did accept to get work experience. His couple of friends didn't get a job even after the year later of graduation because they were waiting to get a job that satisfies them. As you can see, It is better to accept employment as soon as you have a chance.
Furthermore, employment will help to pay bills. We all have family and we need a paycheck to pay our bills. For instance, when I finished my master's degree in the clinical pharmacy I did accept a job offer from the small pharmaceutical company. From the beginning, I was interested to work in the top ten pharmaceutical companies like Johnson and Johnson, Merk, Pfizer, etc. It was very hard and competition to get a job into those companies and there might possibility that I have to wait for a couple of months. Instated, I did accept a job offer from the company so I was able to pay my tuition fee and other bills like rent, grocery, car payment. This example taught me that to pay the bill we need to accept the work offer.
In summary, while various perspectives and viewpoints on this issue exist, I am convinced that we have to accept a secure job as soon as we have the opportunity. Not only today's market is very competitive but also will help to pay our bills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun competition seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many competitions'.
Suggestion: Many competitions
...o get a job in this competitive market. Many competition is there to get work. Even though many ...
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Line 5, column 675, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... work experience. His couple of friends didnt get a job even after the year later of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30414746544 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54365357336 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444700460829 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7303215476 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2173913043 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.39130434783 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252230835942 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773769686464 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674002566905 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157024429876 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759650265139 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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