You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course.
. say how much cooking you've done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Sir Brown
I’m writing to inform you about my last experience in your cookery school. I have been cooking almost five years, moreover it’s occupation. However, in your school I taste a different part from kitchen. The tutors which in the school, the kitchen equipment for us was a perfect. I felt like a young and happiest chef in the world when I was learning the bakery lesson. Therefore I want to say you and yours tutor’s are amazing.
When I back to from course, cooking something is becoming inevitable pleasure for me. Thus since four day, I remain cook all day in my unprofessional kitchen. Moreover, I be able to join more lecture as a Demi chef if it is convenient for you. And also, I have recommendation for your course. Last month I attempted to course in Vienna. It was a different and enjoyable. You must check this course. It’s consist of agricultural food. Maybe You can improve your kitchen with this idea.
I’m waiting your answer.
your sincerely.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-02-12 | ielts_tony | 89 | view |
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features a 78
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 56
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or exp 61
- Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars.To what extend do you agree? 61
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task There is growing evidence that man made activities are making global temperatures higher What might be the man made causes of temperatures rising How should we deal with this problem Give reasons for your ans 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... when I was learning the bakery lesson. Therefore I want to say you and yours tutor'...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...is becoming inevitable pleasure for me. Thus since four day, I remain cook all day i...
^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...a. I'm waiting your answer. your sincerely.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91860465116 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77824255471 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662790697674 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.910444215 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.875 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.75 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320629186115 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096379303199 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081253233912 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185526363112 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08198842934 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.07 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.