In many countries, young children are looked after during the
day while their parents go to work. In a sense, they are raised by
guardians and not their biological parents. What is your opinion
of this family arrangement
Nowadays, as both the parents are working, a greater trend of baby sitters and cretches is being observed and followed in the society. After a certain time, the parents are forced to keep guardians for their children due to work commitments. I, personally feel that it is not a very good option during the growing years of a child. The guardian cannot provide the same care and warmth as the parents. It further compromises with the security of the baby as well.
Firstly, it should be noted that guardians or caretakers cannot provide the same care to parents as the parents will. They just try to keep the baby occupied. The nurturing that a parent might provide cannot be compared to what a caretaker provides. To infer, most of the caretakers are uneducated and hence, they cannot provide creative activity for the child.
Secondly, the safety of the child also gets compromised when a strange person comes at home to take care of the child. There are many examples of crimes being committed against young children. Many episodes of ill-treatment of the child have come to news as well. Since the young one is incapable of protecting himself/herself, their safety gets highly compromised.
Hence, it is clear from the above-mentioned points that hiring a nanny or guardian for young children is not a very viable option. Not only is it unsafe, but also hampers the creative development of the child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8875 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71620330916 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5375 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.381306513 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.2 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155000661956 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512193241115 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484924503975 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873000421529 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033775328535 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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