your next door neighbor likes to listen to music late at night. because of the loud music you often lose sleep.write a letter to your neighbor. in your letter- describe the situation- explain the problem it is causing you- offer at least one solution

Dear Mr. Beckam

I am Ben Johnson, your tenant in the apartment B15. I am writing to notify you about the unbearable noise the new tenant of B13 is making which i have endured for the last couple of days with patience.

The new resident on B13 is making life tough to me. They moved in two weeks ago and i am already forced to write you this complaint letter. They have parties almost every day and listen to music with loud volume.

I go to bed at around 10.30 pm only to wake up again by the loud noise from their flat. I live also with a teenage daughter and my wife who are equally agitated.

I was wondering if you could talk to other tenants of floor B and get to know what is really happening. You have the authority to talk to the tenant of B15 and solve this problem. Otherwise, i will be obligated to shift to a new residence.

Expecting your cooperation in this regards.

Yours sincerely,
Ben Johnson

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Average: 6.4 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to me. They moved in two weeks ago and i am already forced to write you this com...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd my wife who are equally agitated. I was wondering if you could talk to othe...
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Line 9, column 192, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... B15 and solve this problem. Otherwise, i will be obligated to shift to a new res...
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Line 11, column 31, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...dence. Expecting your cooperation in this regards. Yours sincerely, Ben Johns...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3908045977 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31753897925 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6615164069 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6666666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164778702307 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575011271927 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408109649836 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792132920948 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257386698602 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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