Advertisements have impacted our modern world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.
Advertisements have become an effective element for businesses around the world; the modern age has been impacted by advertising in several ways. Merits and demerits will be discussed below.
On the positive side, advertising is an efficient marketing tool which can easily inform customers about their demands’ choices. In other words, different kinds of advertisements through television, signboards and websites help people to have a wide choice to get their requirements; therefore, they can make a choice without the need to go to markets. Moreover, it helps consumers to buy their needs online after getting the information about any item from advertisements’ tools. For instance, two years ago, I purchased my previous mobile after watching many advertisements about it on YouTube channels.
On the negative side, advertising can provide misleading information and fake claims about products in order to raise their sales. Not only does advertisement encourage excessive consumption but also it creates a gap between community members. As an illustration, it has the ability to easily reach consumers from different financial statues and different generations. Furthermore, children have been influenced by products variety through commercials and add pressure on their parents’ shoulders to buy their requirements. For example, my friend said that he bought his son a toy online and he found that it did not has the same features as the advertisement showed.
In conclusion, the power of advertising has shifted the balance from the hands of a few to the masses. Therefore, people should be more careful about the negatives and the positives of advertisements. It is highly recommended that people should focus on their needs and not getting influenced by the spreading of commercials and purchasing products they do not need.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
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Line 5, column 623, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...toy online and he found that it did not has the same features as the advertisement ...
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Line 7, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d purchasing products they do not need. sements.
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sements
...asing products they do not need. sements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53146853147 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26748579136 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5217272379 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17224427552 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584366493492 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658325536764 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12527712655 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982928556205 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.