Humans in one issue make a mistake to learn not to make a mistake anymore. This is the concept to know how to get lesson from the mistakes to avoid them. So, working swiftly and make a mistake is the wrong way to continue in life. Personally, I believe that it is extremely important to work slowly to get the desired result. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, this is important to get the work result correct and complete because only the correctness shows the exact effort that has done on that work. Only if there is lots of hardworking the result of work will be accurate. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About two years ago, I had a project assignment at the university; we ourselves had to choose the deadline for our projects and date of presentations. My classmates chose few days for their project to get rid of that project as soon as possible, while I chose the last possible day of the deadline to investigate more and have a better result from my project. Eventually, the presentations had done, as a result, the best and most accurate project was mine, and for that project only I have gotten the complete score.
Secondly, the correct result of lux work is more reliable than the wrong result of fast work. Every work has its own importance and staple point that has to be done accurately, therefore considering those points while working helps to be a reliable person for works. For example, my father is a teacher and I remember when I was nineteen years old, he was checking his students test paper, I asked him if he needs help for checking them according to the answer key to be finished sooner. He told me that thank you for your cooperation but these are really important to be accurately checked, so I have to focus on each one completely. Even it takes more time but worth it to be a reliable result. Then I realized that my father is one of the best and most reliable teachers in the school that no one crisis from his test and scores.
Finally, this is my point of view to work slowly but correctly for the two reasons that I mentioned above. This is because it helps to have a desired result and because helps to be more reliable person in your job environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
...ort that has done on that work. Only if there is lots of hardworking the result of work will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as to, for example, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45323741007 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54017628473 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482014388489 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1086604812 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7368421053 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9473684211 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186419733252 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708721022921 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632861963192 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127743833228 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500473960842 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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