Advertisements have impacted our modern world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of advertisements.
Advertisements have become an effective element in the marketing business. while some people think that advertising is the best way to buy, others say that advertisement has its serious negatives. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of advertisements.
On the one hand, advertising is the key for many successful businesses; it helps customers to have a wide choice of several products from home. An industrial revolution has been formatted after the advertising spread around the globe which has participated in solving the unemployment issue. On other words, advertising has become a form of our modern life through televisions, social media and radios. For instance, research in the New York Times published that there has been a boost in sales measured by nearly 55% in the period between 2000-2020 due to the increasing in the advertising field.
On the other hand, advertising may provide consumers with a piece of misleading or fake information about products which affects families’ financial situation negatively. Not only advertisement does get to adults mind but also affects children. Offsprings might put pressure on their parents to buy their requirements; this creates a social gap between community members. This is exemplified by research from a community magazine said that almost 40% of Egyptian children have a depression related to the financial differences between them and their schoolmates.
In conclusion, the power of commercials have shifted from the hands of a few to the masses. Advertisements have their merits and demerits on our society members. It is recommended that governments increase the awareness between countrymen in order to have a balance in the purchasing force.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44237918216 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16840739708 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7918550327 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223538812536 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793546969118 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545469481812 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140897097312 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527033111521 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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