Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Being a kid means staying in front of the television for along time. Although some people see this as a typical situation for children, it can be detrimental. In my opinion, kids who spend most of their time watching movies and television will be affected negatively more than positively, I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, youngers can quickly learn violence, and perhaps they can be uncontrolled. In other words, kids are enjoying with the type of movies that they can't see it in real life, such as action movies which contain many superheroes who have special skills. Although many films can be beneficial for them, often they don't see it interesting. In the past, there were few films and were suitable for all ages, but now, there are tons of movies produced every year, which can attract kids to watch them. My own experience demonstrates this problem. When I was six, I was watching Hulk movie with my cousin, and the main character could get angry quickly, and no one can control him for awhile. After the film had finished, my cousin and I were trying to act like Hulk. We destroyed a lot of things around us then, which ended with punishment from our parents. That's why I don't recommend movies for kids.
Secondly, some movies are lie to our kids. To be more specific, you can't drink an antidote and become more significant or stronger. As a kid, you can't distinguish the myth or real, which can lead to danger coincidences. Those movies producers are trying to get inside our kids' minds for earning money only; they don't care about what will happen next.
For example, when I was young, I watched Spiderman, and how he could save people with his special suit and fly anywhere easy; I really loved him. After a couple of days, my parents got me this suit as a birthday present, which was my dream then. One day, I was waking up at night, and all my family was sleeping, I stood on a chair in front of an open window, and tried to act like Spiderman. I was on the verge of flying from the window, but fortunately, my mother woke up and saved me at the last second before jumping from the window. Thus, they prevent me from watching TV for days and got back my suit into the store. For that reason, I agree that television has adverse effects on youngers.
In conclusion, I firmly consider that television is not an excellent choice for our kids, because the violence and the fantasy of many movies that our kids can easily believe, instead we can read them some short stories.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: a while
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2101.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55748373102 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40804165299 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559652928416 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6691309766 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.347826087 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0434782609 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122048131582 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0400380414127 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050846724608 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697552935761 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251553004547 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.