Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is often said that rather than staying away from climate change people should get used to it.Although weather change can affect people's health, there are several reasons why people should find a solution to live with it.
For many years, climate change is something that can not be controlled by someone.This is because many people travel around the world, and experienced different kinds of weather.For instance, last year when I was in thailand the weather was hot and humid, and later I travelled to Melbourne.It was a winter season there, so I have to adjust the different season quickly and learn how to live with different kinds of seasons. So it is easy to see why people should learn how to adapt to different kinds of weather changes.
In contrast, some people argue that many living beings can get sick and even die if they do not avoid changes in weather.It is true that it can harm people and animals health,however
If they do not learn how to adjust to different kinds of seasons they are going to suffer more since there is no guarantee that when climate will change.
To sum up, people should learn to adjust to different kinds of climate changes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, in contrast, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80487804878 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47238646342 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.386606475 49.4020404114 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.0 106.682146367 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 20.7667163134 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17693947927 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105301760281 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583279261384 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111920681063 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465200935343 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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