Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are important than history.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Academic subjects have a major impact on the student life. It is widely believed that history is a crucial subject in schools as it aids us in understanding different cultures, whereas some people opine that science and technology are the subjects which must be given higher preference because of the technological advancements. This essay discusses both the views before drawing concrete decisions.
On the one hand, historical events taken place in the ancient times can help us understand our roots. Furthermore, it will give us a clear knowledge about distinct cultures and traditions across the world. In addition to this, we can understand the various practices followed by the ancient residents, which can prove to be effective in the recent times. For example, the students of the "University of Wales" who have chosen history as their main field have carried out developments in the agricultural practices, according to the Harappan culture's farming methods and it has given magnificent results.
On the other hand, some learner's may find history to be a boring subject as it is theoretical when compared to science. As science and technology is based on practical experiments, most of the students find it intriguing. Due to this, they can provide better results in studies. Also, due to the growing population, the insatiable need for technological development also increases. If the students have profound knowledge in this field, it will help them in earning more as well as contributing to the society. To illustrate this, a research conducted by "Science now" magazine depicts that 80% of the students, who selected science as their major got placed in companies with good salaries which provided them with innovative work.
In conclusion, history fascinates people in learning different cultures and practices followed in the past. However, it can be a boring subject. From my perspective, science and technology should be considered as the major subject because of the improvements it brings and the innovation it has.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 472, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34461538462 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06662275931 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563076923077 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7585038482 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188560530914 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576856910319 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481119529745 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122146035956 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056012052802 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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