Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both view and give your own opinion
Its popularly believed that these days raising kids is not an easy task. Many parents always wonder about leisure time of their children. Many think their progenies should actively participate in team activities and some think opposite. They argue that its good for kid to learn on his own. This essay will discuss both point of views and will suggest that its always better for kids’ development to learn with joining other fellow.
Aristotle called human being, “a social animal”, and human societies are built through collectivism. When a kid joins with his other fellows than his character develops and characteristics of common welfare and empathy. In this way a kid can learn fast and become good human as well. In group exercises, different minds come together and develop more innovative and creative ideas. In this process learning accelerates at its fast pace.
On the flip side it is argued that due to violence, hater and lust in society, groups can lead to develop bad habits in kids. It may be stated that kids are innocent and they learn what they see. Yet it’s more favourable for kids to play or do his favorite past time alone. By this safety of kid will not be compromised that will more beneficial for him and his parents.
To articulate the discussion, I may say that although its natural for kids to be with others rather alone however owing to safety issues many disagree with this point of view. However, I am of opinion that kids should be encouraged for groups in their extra time that will develop better cognitive skills for their future.
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- Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both view and give your own op 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...nd empathy. In this way a kid can learn fast and become good human as well. In grou...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lop more innovative and creative ideas. In this process learning accelerates at it...
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Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...ble for kids to play or do his favorite past time alone. By this safety of kid will not b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92250922509 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4775678281 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59778597786 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2934129832 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205898188484 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684644516578 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07226635407 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133559065832 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934820713703 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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