Thorough history Trust and faithfulness have played a dominant role in social life. all of us heard about millions of stories in history about the consequences of telling or not telling the truth and what has been happened after that. some people are inclined toward the opinion that being truthful is the most prominent factor affecting their relationship while others look at this concept through a different lens and are against this fact. From my own perspective, I support the first idea and in next paragraphs will determine my reasons.
The first reason is that when people tell the truth, later can count on each other more comfortably. Let's Consider a situation in which we ask a friend to help with an unexpected situation. if he has time but tells us that i,m busy, finally maybe we understand that one day that he has lied to us, the question is that after finding out that he was not truthful with us, will we trust him again? the answer is No. probably we will reduce our friendship with this types of guy.
The second reason which deserves so words here is that continuing life without anxiety is not possible without telling the truth. when people tell the truth, thy are not disgust about upcome on the other hand after telling a lie, one is always worry about results and thinks what if he/she realize that i lied to him/her. so this anxiety can be able to destroy his mood.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first which may think a people at first glance, still there is another reason. how can see community progress, if their members do not trust each other ? society is created base on people relationship. if they atart to lying to each other, after a period of time nobody will not trust the other ones. Hence communication of society members wll decrease to the minimum point of it and maybe sooner or later that society see downgrades.
To make a long story short, although sometimes it's so hard to tell the truth and one maybe feel shameless about that truth, it's the best way to keep a relationship and society successful. by telling the truth everybody will feels better, even though the one who hears the truth be a bit sad in the begining, finally he/she will understands that being truthful is the most important factors in a relationship. i think the key point is that how to say the truth, it should not be so directly, at first we can make a introduction about that fact and then when the one is ready tell it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, look, may, second, so, still, then, while, i think, on the other hand, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63097949886 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47051936019 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514806378132 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7958076403 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1052631579 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.31578947368 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.5376344086 470% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235064326535 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663922897886 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752834697253 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13119407355 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080508472711 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.