Some parents and teachers think that children's behaviour should be strictly controlled, while some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
People have different views about whether children should be given full freedom to behave or there should be strict restrictions on them about how to behave. In my opinion, it depends upon the age of the children that how their behaviour should be regulated.
On the one hand, children behave in a good manner, in some people's opinion, when they are set free to behave rather than imposing restrictions on them. They may argue that children growing up in a friendly environment are usually kind and considerate to others since they mimic this kind of behavior from their parents and teachers. By contrast, if their parents and teachers model aggressive, rude behavior while shaping children's behavior, they are more likely to imitate their parents and teachers and to display same kind of behavior towards others.
On the other hand, parents and teachers ought to strictly control children's behavior– in order to teach children how to behave appropriately– in other people's opinion. It is their belief that this kind of restrictive approach will act as deterrent for children to display anti social behavior. When children know that they are going to be punished if they do not behave appropriately, they may behave in a good way.
In my prospective, the amount of restrictions on children's behavior should be adjusted according to their ages. Since young children do not know how to behave appropriately, and they are accustomed to imitating their parents and teachers, the soft attitude and friendly environment would help them to learn how to behave appropriately. However, as they grow and become more mature, the level of restrictions can be increased because, during this age, they must know that they have to pay the price if they show disruptive behavior.
In conclusion, different people have different approaches about how children's behavior should be controlled, but I personally recommend that age of children is a crucial factor which decides how parents and teachers should confine children's behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ildren behave in a good manner, in some peoples opinion, when they are set free to beha...
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Line 11, column 189, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to imitating'.
Suggestion: accustomed to imitating
...w to behave appropriately, and they are accustomed to imitate their parents and teachers, the soft at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24770642202 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84624556621 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480122324159 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2819709318 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311483516117 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144210195957 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912663098325 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217819947041 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826704025894 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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