A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

it is one of the facts that animals are being used for serving human beings for several years. Thus, few people believe that animals shouldn't be used to serve men for food and research as it will harm them. While others believe that animals can be used to serve human beings as they want. I strongly agree that animals are important but can be used to serve human beings.

Various animals have been brutally used for research and to acquire flesh from them. animals are also living species and have a sense of pain and pleasure. Hence, with these acts, they suffer from ache. Authorities should implement rights for them as they are an innocent creature and cannot speak for their justice. To illustrate, the mouse has been widely used in experimental researches for several years, including shocks, high dose medicines, and physical harms. moreover, their flesh is edible everywhere throughout the world. To illustrate, according to research conducted by J. Thomson's, in one day, millions of chickens are being killed in the United Kingdom. I am against this view, although animals are being utilized by humans they are in need of them for their lives.

On the contrary, Homo sapiens is the most important creature in this world. If they will skip eating meat, several health issues can occur such as malnutrition. Furthermore, scientists are trying their best to overcome disease outbreak, for this, they are doing experiments on animals to discover any solution for the unsolved health problems. To illustrate, in 1894, Dr. Mary tried the first vaccine on his neighbor directly which made him paralyzed. moreover, it is reported in the journal of human health that people who don't eat meat suffer from an amino acid deficiency. I strongly support this view, that we cannot avoid using animals for serving humanity.

To conclude, animals have rights and should not be used brutally, but, we cannot eliminate to use them. As their meat is required for human nutrition and scientific experiments can't be performed directly on human bodies

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, while, such as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48995212639 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7810643562 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7619047619 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381624342663 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115626242564 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082962279407 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245980633343 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710615569334 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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