The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
In today's world the competition is seen everywhere like for example a student who wishes to get first rank an employeer who wants to get a promotion in that way every task has become so competitive that people don't really think of anything else other than chasing dreams and running through rough days.
Firstly,surviving in the present competitive world is definitely a tougher one.There are few advantages to cope up with the present situations although this creates a major problem in other side of the life.When it comes to advantages it is that we are trying to have a better life comparing with others like example purchasing a car then a house such wishes keep pushing in our mind and although this gives you a good status and individuality we are forgetting the family importance neglecting parents and not getting married in the right age just to earn more money.
Secondly,In olden days there was not much interests on earning and spending money and even working lifestyle is different at present which in return effects our health and in the past a family is always seen having dinner together have a good time but now children hardly share time with parents as they are busy in their own life as settling things and goals as well as earning money.Although it racing and leading a hustling life we tend to introduce new habits to relieve from stress like alchohol,smoking which effects our health in later life.
Thirdly,People also don't really tend to care about who is living in their next door and they do not mingle with people as it wastes their time instead they invest in something which can benefit only for themselves.Such kind of thinking is effecting the society like for example if there is a robbery in the next house they don't really care unless nothing happens with them.Such kind of thinking impact the later generation where there is no interaction with person to person.
In the conclusion,Would agree with the speaker and solution could be only if individuals tend to notice the problem and work accordingly rather than suffering it later.
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- Argument Topic The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies 50
- A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise At present the nearest jazz club is over 60 miles away from Monroe thus our proposed club the C Note would have the local market all to itself In addition there is ample evidence of 59
- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves 73
- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves 50
- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88700564972 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77014816097 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 23.0359550562 304% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.906984897 60.3974514979 255% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 346.0 118.986275619 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.8 23.4991977007 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.8 5.21951772744 513% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.089702451065 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051829943816 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286002985412 0.0758088955206 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051829943816 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286002985412 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 14.1392134831 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.89 48.8420337079 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 12.1743820225 241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.32 8.38706741573 123% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 11.2143820225 268% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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