some people believe that it is good to do multiple jobs,while others believe that it is better to focus on one job?Do you agree or disagree?
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It is true that some adolescent has doing plethora jobs in their life.It can root that some off spring think that it is best only one job in whole life.There are strong opinion because they can easily focus on their work.I am fully agree with this statement.There are manifold reasons for this.This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right way.
The seeds to the issue and multiheads.There most predominant today youth do lot of job in our life.Therefore, they have start doing job in their teenager life as well as they could not focus on studies.After that, they might like do any work instead of they should earn the money that why youngster should not awareness in their study.There have umpteen disadvantages. For instance,education plays a vital role in human being life as far as dweller must not well education in our life.Moreover,there are not achieve anything in their life.
Nevertheless,there are no denying the fact that,some older ponder that kids might consciousness to their school study all in all it maybe superb in their future.Otherwise,pupil could interest in any stream.For example, art, medical, non medical,
international sports, industry line and so on.Furthermore, in my point of view,Co -education utilise doing one job in our life because they know about it is better their future.Lastly,I think that drozes have good educational in their life whereas they have not needs do others job but also well education dwellers all ready choosing best job in our life.while, my mind think there has doing a lot of job non education person.
All said and done,I reckon on one hands education is very essential part role in whole life .Thus, they would well study in their life.However,they can handle anythings. On Other hand,it is no doubt some people do multiple jobs while they has not good collection than they has doing many jobs.
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also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01265822785 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17893568828 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566455696203 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.766582212 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.0 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6666666667 20.7667163134 254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 7.06120827912 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203790507828 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126259552401 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106403674711 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123824512867 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716567407537 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.67 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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