Environmental problems are too great to be managed by individuals so real change can only be managed at government level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and / or examples from your own experiences.
The problem of environmental pollution can now be only dealt by governments rather than individuals. Some people think that environmental issues can be better managed at individual level while others maintain that environmental matters can only be addressed by the government. This essay will discuss why government needs to pay special attention to maintain a healthy environment.
Firstly, environmental hazards and problems have become global and efforts by the government are mandatory to overcome this alarming issue. In this regard, additional check and balance, revision of laws and imposing of taxes on violators as well as defaulters is to be ensured by the government. As an example, legislative bodies should impose heave amount of taxes on industries polluting the air near urban areas. As a result, strict laws and close monitoring by the government can result in decrease of environmental issues.
On the other hand, individual efforts to combat environmental issues are not at all sufficient. Therefore, personal actions are required to be monitored and observed at government or higher level. For instance, a governing body is required to ensure that an individual gets his car engine checked on regular basis to ensure that it is not polluting the air. Hence, it is evident that personal level endeavors are not sufficient to address this alarming issue.
To conclude, I opine that owing to the ever increasing environmental problems, governments should take into account several steps to maintain a healthy and balanced environment for its citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1207.87684729 110% => OK
No of words: 245.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44489795918 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07070640368 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5920704398 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.166666667 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237385187556 0.242375264174 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895008398549 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698498176959 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137177589766 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892236751616 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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