Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.
To what extent do you agree? Support your point of view with reasons and examples from your own experiences.
Most people leave home at an early age to pursue their educational and professional careers. Some people consider departing from loved one’s at an early age for attainment personal goals as beneficial, while others maintain this act as non-beneficial. This essay will discuss the positive aspects of leaving home at a young age to study and work.
Firstly, education and has no boundaries. Therefore, people from small towns tend to flourish their careers in respective fields of interest by moving to cities with more opportunities. As an example, students in pursuit of better and quality knowledge move to bigger cities with renowned universities which equips them with better degrees and assists in attaining better jobs. As a result, to follow and develop a better career people elect to move to various universities located far from their homes.
On the other hand, employment sector has become over crowded. Therefore, people residing in small towns and cities do not have access to ample of job opportunities available in bigger cities. Hence, to seek better employment and quality of living a number of people migrate from their home towns and depart from their loved ones.
An exponential increase is observed in young people to leave their homes to pursue good careers. In my opinion, owing to greater educational and job opportunities offered by bigger cities individual’s should leave their home to follow a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their home to follow a better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, so, therefore, while, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27896995708 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85162048575 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56652360515 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9188203555 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205866686771 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840723140365 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679240470692 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131054326407 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727807356636 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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