Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
being a parent is a duty that most of people will experience during their life. there is an arguable that for being a superb parents some inner behaviour should be learnt from earlier grades of school. I completely agree that indispensable skills for being an especial parent should be taught from primary school. this essay will also illustrate some features of an ideal parent.
there is a belief that essential skills for being a lovely parent in future should be practice from earlier ages of life.I believe that key virtues should be taught through events of life from rudimentary grade of school, so that they can will be practiced day in day out and eventually they will penetrate to our mindset and behavior. Moreover, the fundamental of being a proper parent is being a good human and have a sense of sympathy for others.
there are several skills that an individual should learn include tolerance, responsiblity, financial savvy and awareness. Firstly, a parent should be tolerant in confronting of their children's mistakes and hand in several solution calmly without any struggles to rectify their mistakes. Secondly, parents should also be responsible and try to do best their tasks. Thirdly, they need to be intelligent in financial subjects and prepare a comfortable condition for their offsprings so that they a care free childhood. At last but not least, they should recognize their children's situations and find out their mood previous talking to them. there are more range of considerations such as to be friend, have a thicker skin about their children's critics or not being prejudice and so on that can not fit to this essay.
In conclusion, It seems to me that being a lovely parent needs some skills such as perceptive, well informed and more other virtues that they should be institutionalized from first grade of school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05844155844 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75273365716 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529220779221 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5790135835 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.846153846 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338563924288 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150081998506 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874459991823 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239273011575 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650421057441 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.