You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Some people argue that, it will be beneficial to give education on good parenting skill to young people from school, while other said, this is not necesary. But i agree on this statement, because proving good skills to younger help them to develop their confidence and make them responsible citizen. This essay will also discuss on skills people need to develop to be a good mom and dad.
Firstly, becaming a parents is a very responsibe job, because you need to take care of yourself, work and babies altogether at once. If our educational institution starts proving knowledge about patenting skills, in future it helps them to raise a child confidently. For example, many people are afraid to be a mom and dad on the lack of good parenting knowledge. It is difficult to maintain a work life balance, resulting many child did not get enough support and help from their family. Parenting skill also make them responsible and importance of family planning for thier personal and family growth.
Secondly, people need to develop many skills on them to be a responsible and good parents. The foremost skill is communication with child, which is the first thing baby learn from their parents. Effective communication include active listner, understanding baby language, appropriate use of language which baby can adoptvery quickly and apply. Additionallty, connection help family to stay close with each other and understand the value of family. Good conection with parents encourage child to speak with their parents and help them to choose right path in the future.
In conclusion, becaming a parents and raising a baby is not a easy task. People need to develop a different skills on them scarificing their dream to be a parents. Starting education of good parenting from younge age help people in planning and orgazining their life in a good manner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...e other said, this is not necesary. But i agree on this statement, because provin...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun child seems to be countable; consider using: 'many children'.
Suggestion: many children
...maintain a work life balance, resulting many child did not get enough support and help fro...
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Line 7, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing a parents and raising a baby is not a easy task. People need to develop a dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74394064036 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503246753247 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4279980739 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.9375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262297166238 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956443731802 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701872241717 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178786169401 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060947920654 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.