Despite large numbers of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining is gaining popularity in contemporary world .
What problems are associated with it ?
What solutions can you suggest ?
Although indoor and outdoor sport centres are common in our life, still large number of people are not interested in practicing physical activity. The objective of this essay is to outline both problem associated with inactivity and appropriate way of dealing with it.
One of the most significant result of inactivity is obesity with a tremendous health hazards associated with it. A rising number of obese people all over the world is reaching an alarming level especially in developing countries; this is because practicing sports increase caloric expenditure so prevent fat accumulation in body. For example, riding a bicycle for an hour every day per month burns seven thousands of calories which decreasing ten kilograms of body weight.
A successful way to overcome inactive trend starts from government by implementing (evidence based school children physical activity program) which include one hour lesson to practice multi sport activities. In addition, integration health education message about importance of physical activity in school curriculum. For example, a Japanese schools obligate children, even in vacations, to run every day with challenges between students this in turn suggesting parents to share their children.
In brief, luxurious life accustom people to do less efforts in their daily activity which in turn increase percentage of overweight among different nations including all age groups. So, solutions must start from early in life, childhood and adolescence, by applying a multi task governmentental sport programs which suggest students to practice activity and to read about benefits of activity in their books in a small words.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, for example, in addition, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54509803922 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88586953681 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639215686275 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.218208919 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0897860388043 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387472664907 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389504968737 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605587511072 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401325073737 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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