Despite large numbers of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining is gaining popularity in contemporary world .
What problems are associated with it ?
What solutions can you suggest ?
A Sedentary life-style has become a trend in the entire world, despite there are a lot of Gyms where people can perform a physical activities for the benefit of their health. This type of lifestyle can lead to some problems linked to physical and mental health.
There are various reasons related to the stationary life, a lot of people nowadays tend to be unmovable for some reasons. May be they do not want to do any effort doing the physical activities and they just prefer sitting or laying down while watching T.V, browsing the internet, playing electronic games like X-Box/Play Station or using their mobile phones. This behavior can lead to both mental and physical health problems, some of them, obesity, depression and addiction to technology which negatively affect their health life. For instance, people who choose such a way of living, they might be vulnerable to diabetes or high blood pressure due to extra weight and in few cases, people who use technology in excessive way, they might be liable to autism. In brief, this kind of life style can make people inactive and easily affected by some diseases.
However, the serious problems that may face this kind of life style, there are some solutions for it. People should reduce the time spent in front of computers and electronic games and get involved in doing physical exercises, even if they do not have enough time to do sports. For example, they must deduct a ten-minutes' walk every day, this can lead to save their lives and keep them in a healthy condition. In addition, they should participate more in social life by visiting relatives and friends to avoid sitting for long hours in front of technology, this way can keep them away from mental problems.
In conclusion, the stationary life style can consider a serious problem that the world face nowadays, but there are also available solutions can be used if people's awareness increased in identifying the problem itself and their being willing to solve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'activity'?
Suggestion: activity
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Suggestion: Maybe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94362017804 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49777613316 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554896142433 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0265087632 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.833333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865482280118 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425685986569 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469521841837 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831555389561 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579967721363 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.