Despite large numbers of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining is gaining popularity in contemporary world .
What problems are associated with it ?
What solutions can you suggest ?
Although a large number of gyms are present nowadays, most people choose a rather motion lacking lifestyle. Consequently this issue affects many of who practice this way of living.
Unquestionably, the problem mentioned above would evidently increase obesity rates. To elaborate, a non-moving life would cause the body to accumulate more fat consequently, the person would gain weight without losing the excess as they don’t move around that much. For example, people with ‘at home jobs’ are always in their residence; working and in this situation they would rarely get out. As a result they usually don’t go out in general, let alone going to the gym, going for walk, etc. Another consequence, many diseases have increased which is caused by the inflated rates of obese people.
The most obvious solution to this pandemic is to raise awareness about this whole situation. To emphasize, the authorities should make campaigns to show the community the benefits of movement. In addition, they could make provide athletic classes for every age group; this can motivate the residents to attend these classes. Similarly, charities can make many motion inducing events such as marathons to raise money; for this reason, many attendants would come as they will be interested in doing some charity work, and the same time they would be in motion instead of remaining at home.
To summarize what has been mentioned above, many think that a sedentary lifestyle is one of the biggest issues in the 21st century. Obviously, it can cause numerous problems, but the most evident one yet is the high obesity rates. In addition, the suggested solution is to raise awareness among the people being affected by it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
Although a large number of gyms are present nowadays, most people ...
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Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('rather') instead an adjective, or a noun ('motion') instead of another adjective.
...re present nowadays, most people choose a rather motion lacking lifestyle. Consequently this is...
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Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...oose a rather motion lacking lifestyle. Consequently this issue affects many of who practice...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun motion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many motions'.
Suggestion: many motions
... classes. Similarly, charities can make many motion inducing events such as marathons to ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, similarly, so, for example, in addition, in general, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13261648746 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59444240809 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637992831541 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2631042189 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113018509754 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368113842833 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351455757291 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708710571481 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394529157512 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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