Write a letter to your neighbour to say goodbye, as you decided to leave the area and move to a new home. In your letter say
– Explain why you are moving.
– What will you miss the most?
– Invite him/her to your new home.
Dear Mrs. Williams,
I am writing to bid you a good-bye, as you know we are finally shifting to a new big house at carlton street.
Since our marriage, me and Rahul have resided here. Now that our family has grown big, it was difficult to manage in a small place. However, we have found a perfect house fulfilling the needs of all the family members. It is a 4 bedroom house with a big living room and a garden in the backyard. Rahul is more than happy to have found a house near his office.
Nonetheless, you both will be missed immensely. I cannot find words to thank you enough for the support you have given to us. I will especially miss the evening walks and the gossiping with you.
I would like to invite you to come along with Mr. Williams to our new house this saturday.
We can have a barbeque dinner in the garden area.
I hope to see you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Ria Roy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng walks and the gossiping with you. I would like to invite you to come along ...
^
Line 15, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to see you soon. Yours Faithfully, Ria Roy.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, nonetheless, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37869822485 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31785049934 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9186049851 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.9230769231 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207105171859 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696360458078 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672180882107 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108042008824 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737271279571 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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