In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?
In today's time people prefer to visit malls and shopping complexes for purchasing goods rather than going to local shops. This essay will agrees that rise in preferences of people for travelling to shopping centres is a positive developement for nation as well as the society. Firstly, this essay will discuss the level of convenience for people who visit malls and secondly, it will discuss the positive impact they have on the economy of country.
Shopping malls are a big hub where a plethora of products ranging from clothes to groceries and to other products for daily requirement is available under one roof. People do not have to waste their tiime, money and energy on travelling from one shop to other in order to purchase products. Moreover, apart from shopping they also offer places for people where they can not only relax and enjoy but can also enjoy scrumptious and succulent dishes in restaurant and food courts. Apart from this they also have many attractions such as games zone and play zone where children can play and parents can do their shopping. To elucidate, according to the recent report more than 80 percent of population prefer to spend their time in malls for shopping rather than public markets.
Malls additionally aids in the growth of economy of country. They offer innumerable job opportunities to many people and thus improves the employment rate of the country. Furthermore, they are great source of income generation both for people and governemnt. In other words there people will get salaries and eventually will have disposable income for purchasing goods, in addition to this tax paid by people to government will be spend in constructing community centre, health care centres and schools for people. Thus it will help in the overall growth and deveopmemt of country. To exemplify, in India, more than 60 percent of jobs in shopping complex are oofered to people thus improving the overall financial status of the country.
To conclude, In my opinion, i vehemently agree that shopping centres has a positive impact both on society and country. It not oly provides convenience and comfortability to people but also offers numerous job opportunities and aids in country developement.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...n going to local shops. This essay will agrees that rise in preferences of people for ...
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Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...th care centres and schools for people. Thus it will help in the overall growth and ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... impact both on society and country. It not oly provides convenience and comfortability...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06811989101 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70241214991 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487738419619 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1813257037 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241246054704 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873666560602 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687010311886 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152906971245 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635607003257 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...n going to local shops. This essay will agrees that rise in preferences of people for ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...th care centres and schools for people. Thus it will help in the overall growth and ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 123, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... impact both on society and country. It not oly provides convenience and comfortability...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06811989101 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70241214991 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487738419619 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1813257037 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241246054704 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873666560602 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687010311886 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152906971245 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635607003257 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.