The diagram below shows how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station

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The diagram below shows how electricity is produced in a nuclear power station.

The given diagram illustrates how power is generated in nuclear power station.

Overall,the process consists of eleven stage,beginning with uranium fuel heating water and ending up with electricity delivered to home and offices. There is a also a system to stop overheating.

To begin with, the nuclear fuel is kept in containment building to prevent it from escaping. The fuel is pass through two generations, which heats the water inside them,turning it into stream. Next, the stream travels along pipes to a turbine and spins it, which produces electricity in a connected generator. After that,the power pass through a transformer and then through power line, where it is delivered to homes and so on.

The rearming part of the process is a cooling system. Firstly, an outside water source is connected to the turbine by pipes,allowing water to pass around the turbine and prevent it from becoming too hot. Finally,the system produced by this process is released into the air through a cooling tower.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...onnected generator. After that,the power pass through a transformer and then thro...
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...earming part of the process is a cooling system. Firstly, an outside water source...
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...revent it from becoming too hot. Finally,the system produced by this process is rele...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, so, then, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17682926829 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91049174966 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.250714278 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193023639814 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077840115854 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128209668182 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15689642135 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171715785995 0.0819641961636 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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