The diagram below shows information about the amount of money spent on alcohol and drugs Summarize the info by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The Bar chart compares and contrasts data on the amount of dollars drained for the consumption of alcohol and drugs in five distinct years.
In an overview, the expenditure on alcohol is more than drugs, and despite of some fluctuations they seem to rise.

The money spent on alcohol in 1975 and 1992 is nearly equal to 146 US billion dollars. In between these extreme years, the expenditure is fluctuating. In 1977 it had a dip of 6 billion dollars and reached a level of 140 billion dollars, but only after 3 years it rose by 46 billion to reach the highest of 186 billion. However, Five years later, it slummed to 104 US billion dollars, which is 82 billion less.

Similarly, the drug purchase is not far behind, it also witness a growth in its market. The year 1992 saw a consumption of 98 billion dollars and starting year 1997 had only one third businesses i.e. 35 billion of dollars. Similarly, 1997 had 46 billion drainage of money, which grew to double of its value in 1980 and reaching a mark of 102 billion. Although in next 5 years the value decreased to 65 billion, which is equal to an approx of two-third of 1980 value.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...1975 and 1992 is nearly equal to 146 US billion dollars. In between these extreme years...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... Five years later, it slummed to 104 US billion dollars, which is 82 billion less. S...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 57, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'witnesses'?
Suggestion: witnesses
...rug purchase is not far behind, it also witness a growth in its market. The year 1992 s...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, similarly, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52657004831 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53625488832 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4305963242 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0574618862233 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306609034049 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400498809158 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465894183048 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288542068058 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...1975 and 1992 is nearly equal to 146 US billion dollars. In between these extreme years...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 369, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
... Five years later, it slummed to 104 US billion dollars, which is 82 billion less. S...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 57, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'witnesses'?
Suggestion: witnesses
...rug purchase is not far behind, it also witness a growth in its market. The year 1992 s...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, similarly, so, third

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52657004831 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53625488832 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4305963242 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0574618862233 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0306609034049 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400498809158 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465894183048 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288542068058 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.