Nowadays, the world is facing with several environmental problems which have seriously bad effect on both the environment and people. Some people claim that the main problem is that particular species of plants and animals are losing, while others believe there are more important problems. This essay will discuss both statements and propose personal opinion.
Since plants and animals play an extremely important role in our life, the loss of some certain species is considered as a critical condition of nature. Plants help release oxygen for people to breathe and cleanse the atmosphere, some with big tree-trunk play a significant part in preventing natural disasters such as flood or erosion. Moreover, animals contribute to diversifying the wildlife, some of them even have the ability to evaluate the condition of the environment. Therefore, if these species are lost gradually, the nature's ecology will be completely destroyed.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that there are other important environmental problems, soil pollution or air pollution for example. These kinds of pollution mainly have impact on people's life. For instance, water pollution makes the water source seriously contaminated, which affect the water supply for people's daily life, whereas air pollution is not only making the temperature of the earth increase, but also causes respiratory diseases, influence human's health.
In conclusion, every environmental problem has really bad impact on our environment and the daily life. Therefore, the government as well as the inhabitants should be aware of those issues and be responsible to come up with some solutions as to protect the environment and improve it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ill discuss both statements and propose personal opinion. Since plants and animals play an ex...
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Line 3, column 530, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'natures'' or 'nature's'?
Suggestion: natures'; nature's
...f these species are lost gradually, the natures ecology will be completely destroyed. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47908745247 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87680216377 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593155893536 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9787837867 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0833333333 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317922619536 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116949662925 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886350473723 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186334701615 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111075546726 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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