The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
This table illustrates people who consume fast foods in melbourne city.
Amount of fast food consumers in the city of melbourne is calculated in the form of years.
Majorly there are five types of fast foods which include hamburger,fried chicken,salad,fried rice and noodles.
these were sensed in the following years 2005,present year,2025 respectively.Hamburger is the who is always being no:1 not only in the year of 2005 it also being first positon in the present and following year.Noodles took the last place from 2005 to till now eventhough in 2025.
People who eat hamburger their amount has increasing from 2005,present year and in 2025 too .
Amount of people who has eating fried chicken in the year 2005 is 35,present year is 37,estimated amount in 2025 is 45 this shows fried chicken lovers rate has steadily increasing.
Salad eaters amount was suddenly increasing from present year to 2025 which shows salad consumers becoming high in 2025.
Amount of fried rice consumers has icreasing slowly like tortoise in the year of 2005 to present year. From present year to 2025 their value did not increased.
noodles consumers amount has rising as same has fried rice consumers . In the year of 2005 noodles consumers value is 6 , present year and 2025 values is 8 and 9 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fried
...es of fast foods which include hamburger,fried chicken,salad,fried rice and noodles. ...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , salad
...ds which include hamburger,fried chicken,salad,fried rice and noodles. these were sen...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
... chicken,salad,fried rice and noodles. these were sensed in the following years 2005...
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Line 6, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hamburger
...ars 2005,present year,2025 respectively.Hamburger is the who is always being no:1 not onl...
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Line 6, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Noodles
...siton in the present and following year.Noodles took the last place from 2005 to till n...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g from 2005,present year and in 2025 too . Amount of people who has eating fried ...
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Line 13, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 2025. Amount of fried rice consumers has icreasing slowly like tortoise in th...
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Line 13, column 151, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...resent year to 2025 their value did not increased. noodles consumers amount has rising a...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Noodles
...to 2025 their value did not increased. noodles consumers amount has rising as same has...
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Line 14, column 69, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... rising as same has fried rice consumers . In the year of 2005 noodles consumers v...
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Line 14, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ear of 2005 noodles consumers value is 6 , present year and 2025 values is 8 and 9...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11682242991 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03346942593 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495327102804 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.2841755205 43.030603864 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5454545455 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116932666438 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080921124358 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802057557542 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891988512281 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816315891546 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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