Business and commercial organizations should help to solve environmental challenges. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
Nowadays, most country are facing environmental challenges due to the climate change. Some people claim that business and commercial organization should help to solve environmental challenges. I agree with this opinion and I will explain the reason in efficiency and environmental view.
First, on the side of efficiency, business organizations can do much more than normal citizens to help solving environmental problem. For example, a reducing paper policy in global company can save million tons of papers annually, while a student may use only two hundred papers in the same period. Moreover, commercial organizations have the second most resource in the society other than the government. Therefore, their help is much more efficient than citizen or environment protection organizations.
Secondly, from the environment point of view, commercial organizations have the responsibility to solve environment challenges. During the operation of those organizations, they must have produced negative impact to the environment. For example, a factory produces air and water pollution to the city, releasing greenhouse gases such as carbon dioxide which lead to global warming. As a result, they have the responsibility to help to save the environment and solve problems they caused.
In conclusion, I agree that business organizations should help to deal with environmental challenges according to efficiency and environmental reason. In the future, government should cooperate with companies and solve the environmental problems together.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
... much more than normal citizens to help solving environmental problem. For example, a ...
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Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng environmental problem. For example, a reducing paper policy in global company ...
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Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...paper policy in global company can save million tons of papers annually, while a studen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83185840708 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3449454459 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8493794344 50.4703680194 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393219512323 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144992414812 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127962154656 0.071462118173 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271524569469 0.151781067708 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151644258161 0.0609392437508 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.1260098522 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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