Some people believe that some individuals are born with leadership skills, while others think that the individuals can develop those leadership skills. Discuss both sides and state your opinion.
Leadership and learning are indispensable to each other. It is believed by some that leadership is an inborn talent while there is another view that it can be engendered later in life. However, I believe training, experience and determination can make anyone a leader. Let us elaborate this little further.
Intrinsic leadership skills are gifted to some people naturally. Those who have such talents can easily be leaders compared to others who do not. There are a plethora of such prodigies who have contributed to society. For instance, Alexander the Great, Dr Martin Luther King, Mahatma Gandhi to name a few. Their leadership skills reshaped the world's history unprecedently. Although, given the fact that the situation of that era leads them to do what they did, it is undoubted that not many people can lead the world the way they did.
Furthermore, in modern days, giant corporations are being built every day by such gifted and fearless individuals, reshaping the future.
However, without appropriate training and individual's determination, it is hard to unearth these hidden talents. In addition, life experience can catalyst successful leadership. As an example, if a gifted child did not receive proper education or not purposeful to be a pioneer in life due to spoiled childhood or some family issues, it would be impossible for such people to become great leaders. In contrast, those who are determined and well educated in their fields can easily be good leaders even though they are naturally reluctant to lead. Their expertise in certain fields can lead them towards a superior position.
To recapitulate, although there are inborn leaders those who can impact the world, I believe, leadership is a skill which can be achieved with will power and proper training.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...w. Their leadership skills reshaped the worlds history unprecedently. Although, given ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18620689655 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86056462334 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2274742585 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0588235294 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252533228902 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858289806105 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847166591987 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137137187639 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744945191636 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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