During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter:
Remind him when and where you met,
Tell him what kind of job you are interested in,
say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Tom,
I just wanted to write this letter to remind you about our last conversation during or flight from Japan to France. If you still couldn't remember me, I am the guy who sat next to you and we talked a lot during our journey. To be honest, it was a very useful and enjoyable discussion.
Anyway, I thought of putting my pen to paper to let you know that I am really interested to join one of your restaurants, if you have any suitable vacancies for me. Although I don't have much experience in cooking or serving, I am a qualified HR person with almost 10 years of experience in a number of industries. However, I will send my resume for your further reference.
Why I am interested in the restaurant industry is because I strongly believe it is one of the fastest-growing industry and I am keen to get some work experience whilst enriching people who work with me with my talents and compassionate personality.
Hope you will find my resume suitable for your company and looking forward to be a part of a great team.
Thanks and Regards
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ight from Japan to France. If you still couldnt remember me, I am the guy who sat next ...
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Line 9, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y suitable vacancies for me. Although I dont have much experience in cooking or serv...
^^^^
Line 17, column 76, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to being'.
Suggestion: to being
...le for your company and looking forward to be a part of a great team. Thanks and...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, look, really, so, still, mind you, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58031088083 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8161849147 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.382047542 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2222222222 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222954356305 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833841142116 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926477682342 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125739978478 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096210573485 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.