You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
say how your work could be done while you are away
ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Silu,
I am writing to you regarding training for six months in our China Headquaters.
As you are aware of the acquisition of our new client, Mr Miyaki their requirement of Augmented reality based application, it would be imperitive for me to train under our immensily advanced and highly talented designers at our Bejing Office. Furthermore, I can visit the Miyaki Factories to understand the working of the product, which we are developing the app for. Additionally, this would be a great oppurtunity for me to interact with our colleaugues in other countries as well.
I understand that my travelling will affect my work, therefore I have moved all my meetings and other commitsments till the time I come back. Moreover, My Senior Designer, Chhetah has kindly accepted to the apppointments that were urgent and thus could not be moved to another date.
I am aware that I am troubling you for this, however, I would request you to speak to our headoffice for approving my visit. Finally, I would require a written acceptance application to our chinese office from your side. It will be emailed to them 14 days before my departure.
If you have further questions, Please let me know, we candiscuss it further. Looking forward to your response.
Yours Sincerely,
TOka
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...indly accepted to the apppointments that were urgent and thus could not be moved ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01860465116 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95213666194 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1937990846 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216033891545 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802109168749 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498107363831 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115641004806 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522029177513 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.