Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema Others say that to be fully enjoyed films need to be seen in a cinema Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, people are watching movies on their smart phones and laptops, instead of going to movie halls, popularity of digital content could be listed as one of the reason for such a shift. However, some are of the view that theaters provide the ultimate cinematic experience. Though watching a movie with friends and family is also an exhilirating experience in itself, however, in my opinion, computer and tablets provide much needed privacy and flexibity while watching a film or a series.

To begin with, an individual can use their device to watch content from any location or anytime of the day. For instance, if someone is travelling, they can watch their favourite movie while on the bus or a train. Additionally, viewers can save time and money on food, travel and tickets. Though, this is not the case for downloaded content on your cellphones. Finally, the viewer see movies without disturbances or noise around the. Often, people hoot or cheer while watching their favourate actor/actress enter the screen and for someone this could be a nuaisance.

On the other hand, people often visit ciniema halls to experience films made by their favourite directors or actors. At times, people watch movies with their family and friends to celebrate or to enjoy their favourite movie. Besides, prolonged screentime on the small phone or laptops screens cannot be compare to a 72mm screen in a hall. It is believed that, too much screentime could affect the health of the eyes, therefore, movie going experience has less adverse effect on the eyes.

To sum up, cinema halls provide complete movie going experience, however, in today's fast paced life style watching films or webseries on

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06785714286 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59319901327 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0306629988 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.357142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157418936013 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525645118407 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295650082576 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999536273969 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026344100177 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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