Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children. But in the recent times both
parents are getting busy with professional life. Who in your opinion should take the
responsibility of child care now?
There is nothing to say against the vitality the role of mothers in children's upbringing. Although for the past few years both mother and father are to become busier, than ever, so there comes an argue of who is responsible for educating children now. Further we will discuss the topic and come to the conclusion about whose obligation it is more.
On one hand we have people who are supporters of old rule and visions, such as: women suit for household as men for earning money and providing family with all the necessaries. They provide that females are the ones who have to keep house clean, educate new generation and stay at home. Unlikely all this comes as a result of ancient life and methods. Because the notion that old rules has brought us to this society never leaves their minds.
On other hand we have got innovators and feminists for whom equality between genders and the fact that rights of weak part of humanity are untouchable. They provide their vision by the state of today’s society, though there is a difference. Claimed that we are in a society where every one is equal despite its nationality, gender, religion and race.
To conclude, no one is hundred percent to win the argue, thanks to its subjectivity. However as a range of researches concluded, children who are behavioured by both of the parents, are to be more successful and accommodating for community. That is why I concluded that we cant really obligate only one parent.
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- Mothers play key roles in the upbringing of children But in the recent times both parents are getting busy with professional life Who in your opinion should take the responsibility of child care now 61
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...munity. That is why I concluded that we cant really obligate only one parent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77559055118 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.625027863 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637795275591 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0095319399 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115009946031 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384222752566 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481528145389 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693200629601 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055695498451 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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