Some people thinks that government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree.
We cannot emphasize the importance of the healthy diet too much because the junk food does harm to our health. Some people argue that the tax on junk food should be raised so that people will choose the healthy food instead. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this opinion.
First of all, the drawbacks are more than the merits if the government charges more tax on the junk food, like chips, deep-fried food, etc. it is no denying that the purchasing of unhealthy food will go down due to this policy since the price of junk food is higher than before. Nevertheless, this policy triggers some problem at the same time. For the reason that, the healthy food, especially like organic vegetable, is usually much more expensive than unhealthy food, families are required to spend more on living expenses if they need to pay extra tax on unhealthy food. This could be unaffordable for some poor families. Moreover, the tax could have huge impact on the unhealthy food industry which could lead to less sales and profits. As a result, the unemployment in this field will decrease in some degree.
I believe there are better solutions rather than adding tax on junk food pursuing people to have healthy food. One the one hand, the government can lower the price of healthy food so that it can be available for families in different classes. That is being said, the poor does not need to hesitate to buy it because of its affordable price. On the other hand, the concept of healthy diet should be introduced to all the citizens which accelerate the broad spreading of the healthy diet.
In conclusion, it seems to me that increasing the tax on junk food definitely is not the best solution to pursue public to have healthy diet since there are more disadvantages than benefits. I hold the opinion that the government should reduce the price of healthy food and introduce the concept of healthy diet to public so that they can start a healthy diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so that they can start a healthy diet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74635568513 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46731991308 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478134110787 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7820328091 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305389642678 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104151622646 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816371380895 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204519361345 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363639340074 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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