Some people think that the government should increase tax on unhealthy food to encourage people to start eating healthy. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that food which consist of excess fat and carbohydrate will cause damage to our body leading to various health issue. Although some people believe that government should not impose heavy taxes on junk food, I strongly argue that this step will eradicate the unhealthy food habits in the society.
On the one hand, those who protest against levying an extra tax on junk food say that it would disturb their routine food habits and life style. This is because few people find it difficult to prepare food at home all the time. For example, nowadays it is quite common for both parents to work in order to fulfil their family requirements such as paying school fees, rentals and utility bills. In contrast, if there would be an increased tax on food take-a-ways, then people could not concentrate on more important things like studies and career.
On the other hand, I believe that an additional cost on processed food will affect the potential buyers who manage their budget very efficiently. Therefore, instead of spending too much on readymade food, people will make an effort to prepare healthy and nutritious homemade food for themselves. If there is no hitch in buying unhealthy food then people would entirely depend on canned and frozen food which is readily available in the market, then as a result society would face a lot of health issues like gastric cancer, obesity, and heart diseases.
To sum up, despite there would be an interruption in the routine of people’s food pattern due to increased tax on unhealthy food, it is my firm belief that they would look for alternative option for consuming food which is healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, then, therefore, for example, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45464876066 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9995744662 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255057090027 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109278167896 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783350281467 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170943579737 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247038677399 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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