People are having more and more sugar-based drinks.
What are the reasons?
What are the solutions to make people drink less?
There is no doubt that people is increasingly consuming more drinks with added sugar.
This essay will first argue that the reason for this is that population is exposed to a plethora of advertisements that encourage people to consume this type of products. Secondly, it will discuss that increased prices can lower consumption.
To commence with, the influence from excesive advertisements is the foremost cause of people drinking sugar-based products. Despite the fact that is well known that drinks with sugar might generate a negative impact for the health of the society, marketing still promote to people consuming them of on a daily basis. For example, every single day CocaCola company releases advertisements that attracts individuals for buying drinks with added sugar.
One possible solution for this issue is raising the price of sweet-based drinks. Therefore, sugar free beverages might increase in popularity due to the fact that adquiring a sugar drink would be expensive. In fact, governments should control enterprises that produce harmful drinks and impose levy for those who excced a certain sealing price. As a result, people would be encouraged to buy other kind of drinks. To illustrate this, in Australia, prices of sugar based beverages are so hight that nowadays people tend to buy more water.
To conclude, regardless of the potential harm that drinks with added sugar might generate, advertisements are constantly promoting people to consume them. Hence, to decrease consumption, prices of sweet-based drinks should rise dramatically and authorities should impose taxes to companies that sell them
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...increased prices can lower consumption. To commence with, the influence from exc...
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Line 8, column 281, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'company'.
Suggestion: company
... and authorities should impose taxes to companies that sell them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in fact, kind of, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47035573123 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85836072985 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2194833498 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298204895784 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119056250728 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787896163996 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188660440929 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810066704275 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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