Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While the trend to receive the latest information is changing toward the Internet news, some argue that the newspaper is still the most important media to deliver the information. Personally, I disagree with the view and will describe the reasons in this essay.
To begin with, it is true that the Internet plays a significant part in the news world, and there are various advantages that the newspaper would never have. First, Internet news can be easily accessible from anywhere through phone, computer or even smartwatch as long as the signal reaches you. Another meaning is that you can read up-to-minute global information anytime. Second, unlike the newspaper which contains only information selected by editors, Online news provides unlimited data from various sources ranging from a digital broadcast journalist to the government official websites, or even many individuals running their own blogs. This changing trend allows us to select the information depends on our interests. Lastly, the majority of news companies based on the Internet often provide a virtual communication space for audiences, allowing them to interact and share opinions about headlines with each other.
By contrast, I don't see any point that we should regard the newspaper as a major medium for news. Although newspapers are published every morning with the latest news, they will become outdated at night as every single minute is considered as important in this information age. For example, stock markets where the timing is important elements to decide loss and profit would face a problem if analysts anticipate data that came from printed publication rather than real-time updated online news. Moreover, it even has a negative impact on the environmental aspect as millions of trees were sacrificed daily basis to print out those newspapers.
In conclusion, Although the newspaper used to be the main media to deliver news to its subscribers, by its drawbacks and advantages of the upcoming Internet news, it is becoming old-fashioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34267912773 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79300472246 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9185029347 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269374675053 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897512306252 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052789202089 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168460204553 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165509232427 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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