It is said that the leisure time of kids must contain some educational activities and if not so it's a loss of time.I completely agreed with this. In the following paragraph, I 'll elaborate my point of view that why it is important for children to use their time effectively.
In my opinion, leisure time doesn't mean only fun time or free time which meant to be wasted in vain. It is basically a relaxation time in which anybody, whether kid or old have some break from routine work and makes him refresh for another goal .it must be beneficial. Time is very precious and if children won't understand its importance since their childhood, maybe in later life they get some problems in time management. Leisure time activities must be educational healthy and fun-seeking. for example sports like cricket, basketball, football or any other physical game of interest which helps in children both physical and mental health.
Another example related to my point of view is reading books if some need more consoling and relaxing activity. It helps in brainstorming and gives ideas of differences about the subject and also make time beneficial.
hence in conclusion children should be aware of the importance of time, no matter they have ample time, but with healthy educational activities, they utilize their time in the best way as well as get fun and relaxation. Parents should provide them such an environment which helps them to choose such activities of their interest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73275264976 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8121136411 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278707660027 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114571703247 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655873226809 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166411366908 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712603658601 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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