Your children go to a local school that requires volunteers to accompany school science trips.
Write a letter to the school to apply to be a volunteer. In the letter:
– Introduce yourself and give details of your children who attend the school
– Explain why you are interested in the position
– Talk about any relevant experience that you have with children
Dear Sir/Madam,
My daughter attends your school and has recently informed me about an open position for a long-term volunteer who could assist children during school trips and I am writing to you to express my interest to this position. My daughter's name is Jenny Rebecca studying 4th grade with Mr. John being the primary staff of her class.
Since I have a strong relationship with your school and as my daughter is a student of your establishment since her Kindergarten, I know most policies in and out that are in place and owing to this, I can resonate myself to the job much easier. Also, I have a good rapport with most staffs and hence, I would not have any problems with taking up this position whatsoever.
I currently work from home, as I have to take care of my child. However, before my daughter was born, I have held some work experience as an event organizer at St.Johns school in Canterbury, where my job predominantly involves scheduling trips to the countryside, museum and to the local old age home. I strongly reckon that most duties of my past job would coincide with the current position at your school and it would be a facile task to quickly assimilate the roles and responsibilities of the job. In short, this role is going to be a piece of cake to me.
I have attached my CV for your persual, and I look forward to hearing from you about the interview and further discussions.
Your's Faithfully,
Jessica Latorre
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Johns
... experience as an event organizer at St.Johns school in Canterbury, where my job pred...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, look, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66536964981 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74224395177 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0140246968 44.8134815571 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210119311674 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810335493422 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807718358827 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126297959295 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733977344127 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.