What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad
Student and worker mobility has been on the rise owing to globalization and there have been accompanying merits and demerits with this trend. Some of the significant benefits such as better exposure to a broader job market which pays dividends at a later point of time and enhancing the social skills cease to exist; however, financing immigration and being subjected to discrimination in those places are some of the constructive drawbacks one might endure during such endeavours.
To begin with, residents, of late, are much conscious of the surplus amount of better employment and education prospects and this lures people to make their move to such locations to have a flourished career. Firstly, they acquire the necessary skills while residing in those developed nations and this overwhelmingly benefits them on a longer run. Secondly, during this drive, immigrants are being subjected to people from different parts of the world, culture and religion and this aids in acquiring better social skills which helps them lifelong. Hence, a blend of all contributes to considerable and constructive merits. Canadian Permanent Residency and Education programmes, for instance, welcomes prospective applications be it to study or emigrate from around the globe and this has proven to the world to be one of the most successful programmes, where people are able to integrate with almost no difficulties and prosper well.
On the contrary, there are some significant downsides that cannot be ignored. Most immigrants during such occasions face discrimination on the basis of their colour, nationality and financial standard. In the US, for example, in the year 2019 alone, there have been a plethora of gun-related mortalities such as shootings, where the armed personnel targets immigrants mainly from South Asia owing to strong aversion by local residents on these economically challenged immigrants. Furthermore, the sky-high budget involved in making a long-term move outside the home nation to developed destinations adds insult to the injury. It is estimated that an average immigrant, especially from South Asia, has to spend around 15000 US dollars from scratch until reaching the destination which wreaks havoc financially to those families.
To sum up, as awareness about moving to financially developed nations from economically weak countries among individuals is rampant, a prodigious amount of undergraduates and working professionals consider flocking to such wealthy nations and after immigrating, they infuse into them all the necessary soft skills, better work ethics and better standard of education. On the other hand, impending drawbacks such as increased risks of being discriminated and harassed and costing travellers an arm and a leg cannot be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2356.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5046728972 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02665971891 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572429906542 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 732.6 506.74238477 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3121570681 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.285714286 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5714285714 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7142857143 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0139018652185 0.244688304435 6% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00384252505252 0.084324248473 5% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0094280558229 0.0667982634062 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00870048947055 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00905937094787 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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